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Title: Because I'm here - A NaruSaku Manifesto
Pairing: Uzumaki Naruto x Haruno Sakura
Fandom: Naruto
Spoilers: Up to Naruto manga chapter 319
Notes: This post actually isn't the manifesto itself: it's an index linking to the sub-parts, because the manifesto exceeds the Livejournal post character limit (by several times in fact).
Huge thanks to the admin of [livejournal.com profile] ship_manifesto for allowing me to post this somewhat unconventional essay. =D



Introduction: Read first? It won't take you long. ^^

1. I've divided this manifesto into several posts, and placed the other parts in my own LJ, because it is otherwise above the accepted LJ character limit. This here, is just the index.

2. This manifesto is long! So don't worry if you don't have time to read it in one go (even I have problems reading it in one go, and I wrote it...). Each part of the manifesto has an extensive clickable index at the beginning, so you can pick up where you left off!

3. This manifesto is also very image-heavy, particularly in Part 3 because of a few animated sequences. They should all have loaded by the time you reach them, but I'm warning just in case. Some people may also have browser display problems, so if you don't see Any images: that's a problem. Refresh? Sorry. :S

4. Comments go to this post please, and not to the other sections. It's cleaner this way! =)

5. As per the rules of [livejournal.com profile] ship_manifesto, flames don't go here. So post them elsewhere. Like in your own journals, or in places against NaruSaku! =D Contrary to belief, this manifesto is not destined to those who hate NaruSaku, but on the contrary to existing NaruSaku fans or to open-minded neutrals, in the hopes that it may help them gain a little more appreciation of this pairing. Feel free to hate it though, but express the hate elsewhere. =D

I hope the rest of you enjoy this, because I doubt I'll ever write a Naruto essay this exhausting again. *dead* Below are the links to each section, followed by the general index as reference. Enjoy!


NaruSaku Manifesto Part 1: Don't worry, because I'm here
- introduction of the characters, and part 1 of the manga

NaruSaku Manifesto Part 2: I'm here too, we'll become stronger together
- part 2 of the manga, and prologue to part 3 of the manifesto

NaruSaku Manifesto Part 3: Why NaruSaku? Because being there for each other is the greatest gift of all
- NaruSaku, the couple analysis!

NaruSaku Manifesto: Annex
- fandom resources, and answers to some frequent arguments. And of course, thanks. :)

Edit: I've since added a Mini-counter to frequent anti-NaruSaku arguments :)

NaruSaku Manifesto: Because I'm here
General Index


~ NaruSaku Manifesto Part 1: Don't worry, because I'm here ~


Presentation of the characters

I. Naruto.
I.1. Enter Naruto, the troublemaker!
I.2. A child plagued with a heavy burden, and trying desperately to find acknowledgement.

II. Haruno Sakura
II.1. Strong, understanding, perfect... ah who am I kidding. Enter Sakura: shallow, naive and presumptuous. And rather useless.
II.2. Sakura, a normal child, who through events far beyond her... was forced to grow up.

Manga part I: You don't have to notice me, but I'm right here

I. Naruto to Sakura: From a crush (although not unfounded) to selfless devotion
I.1. The comedic crush! And the very bad start.
I.2. The fairytale, and the realization of why he truly liked her
I.3. Go Sakura! Cheering on the girl he put his faith into.
I.4. As the difficulties arise again... Naruto shows his true devotion
I.5. A glimpse at maturity: selflessness, at the cost of his own happiness...

II. Sakura to Naruto: from rejection based on misunderstanding, to gradual acknowledgement and... trust
II.1. The original misunderstanding, and the shallow start
II.2. From slow acceptance, to acknowledgement of Naruto's spirit
II.3. The beginnings of companionship: this time, cheering each other on
II.4. And gradually... a developing fondness, and contemplation
II.5. As things degrade, the beginning of trust

III. The promise of a lifetime, and the promise to go together!
III.1. The promise of a lifetime
III.2. Naruto vs Sasuke: a battle between brothers...
III.3. The promise to go together!

Conclusion of part 1



~ NaruSaku Manifesto Part 2 - I'm here too, we'll become stronger together! ~


Part 2: Free of prejudices, now it all begins! A new understanding, but also new difficulties.

I. NaruSaku in times of peace: Underneath the fireworks, a "shining young girl's heart"!
I.1. Let's start with the fireworks! "Monster strength" vs "You bastard! You still don't understand a woman's feelings!"
I.2. Underneath the fireworks: genuine comraderie!
I.3. Underneath the underneath: genuine fondness for one another
I.4. And maybe a bit of tenderness
I.5. Mutual admiration and respect: Heaven and Earth! A relationship between equals!

II. The difficulties begin... NaruSaku in times of need: finding in each other the will to move forward
II.1. Sakura lives up to her end of the relationship: this time, I'll be the one to protect them!
II.2. Care for each other's feelings... but also fear of hurting the other
II.3. To overcome these times of difficulties: drawing strength from each other

The next step, and the conclusion of part 2: out of the cyclical, into the mutual

Foreword to the pairing study: does Naruto "Deserve" Sakura?



~ NaruSaku Manifesto Part 3: Why NaruSaku? Because being there for each other is the greates gift of all ~


I. NaruSaku, and their influence on each other: always aiming higher
I.1. Matching strength with strength: doing the best for each other!
I.2. Matching weakness with strength: the power to never fall into despair!
I.3. The result of this influence: equals, companions

II. NaruSaku, the "couple"!
II.1. NaruSaku, the "natural" pair! Natural selves, Natural interactions, and Natural "attraction"
II.2. Naruto and Sakura: they haven't changed, but they've grown!
II.3. Underneath the underneath: a relationship that has grown as well!

III. A walk in the park! An ongoing journey, a mere work in progress
III.1. The gradual development: never huge steps, never intrusive, just slow foundations being built up
III.2. In the end, a slow, ongoing development, but one I feel is more complete as a result: a build-up without "shortcuts"
III.3. This is why I enjoy being a NaruSaku fan: watching a relaxing process unfold

IV. The psychology behind NaruSaku!
IV.1. Because similars attract. And interact. And build happy relationships
IV.2. A gradually developing intimacy: not eye to eye yet perhaps, but each feeling for the other
IV.3. NaruSaku, a companionate love

Conclusion!



~ Epilogue: The NaruSaku Manifesto Annex ~


I. NaruSaku Fandom Recommendations!
I.1. NaruSaku communities and general resources!
I.2. NaruSaku Fanart Recommendations!
I.3. Fanfic Recommendations

II. Silly annex: NaruSaku as a married couple?
II.1. The Hokage and the First Lady!
II.2. NaruSaku as a couple at home: the Yoshino of the Uzumaki household!
II.3. An incredibly well-rounded and powerful shinobi: NaruSaku kids!

III. Answers to frequent common arguments for and against NaruSaku

IV. Final words and thanks!
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Just, Incredible

Date: 2006-11-09 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This is the bes essay concerning to Naruto pairing EVER made, you just take all aspects that are relevant and analyze them in a very incredible way.

The order, the way you mention all the facts, is a long essay, but is really worthy of reading. My favorite part was the 3rd one (but I really enjoyed the 3rd annex as well, i find gorgeous how you answer the questions) your growh analysis and psychology analysis of Naruto are great.

Congratulations!!!

Great Work.

Date: 2006-11-09 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
So fast?

I did not feel like it was so fast?

Date: 2006-11-09 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ew-younerd.livejournal.com
Amazingly well-written and thought-out!! Though there are a couple of parts I'm not sure of at the end, the entire analysis of the relationship was good in the sense that you have given the reader an opportunity to step back from relationship stereotypes and show why you think NaruSaku would work rather than for typical fanfiction reasons.

I feel that people from both sides of the NaruSaku and SasuSaku fandom tend to undermine the feelings of both relationships, but this sums up to me why I like both and why I feel that NaruSaku is completely individual and a very different type of relationship than most in Naruto.

(As for psychology recs; J. Philippe Rushton is someone in the field I despise a bit because of his shithead remarks and racism at times. D: So I kind of eeked at that in the for the "A genetic case?" article, but otherwise they were all mucho fantastico)

I believe what is most important is the independent support these two give each other without being completely needy or dependent on each other. They are very similar in their actions and reactions to things; both strongly emotional people inclined not to hide their feelings, and when they do it's only to remain strong for someone they do not want to let down. Sakura's an intelligent, often emotional and prone to self-doubt kind of woman, who is strong and ambitious in her goals nonetheless and is not afraid to tell someone what she thinks of them. Naruto, I feel, brings out her more spontaneous and less-constricted side and makes her feel more comfortable. And the best thing about that is, he doesn't even need to try to do it. It's a natural process where they play off each other's strenghts. Sakura looks at Naruto as a person; she doesn't see him as some saviour or some perfect hero, and is aware of his flaws and hidden doubts. "Next time, we'll do it together." She tells Naruto on the subject of saving Sasuke, and thus, in the entire manga this might be the only time someone else has bridged a goal of their own with Naruto's to share it with him and support him. And support is probably one of the most important things in a relationship.

Sakura is a bit more subdued around most other people (Sasuke included). Her character is one of more emotional maturity, but Naruto helps mould her into more of an attitude in which she enjoys herself and who she is more. Personalities are difficult things because of all of the things that factor into what exactly makes them. They are subject to change a bit and adjust to environment according to who the individual is around, so it's best you're around someone that fits your character as well.

Naruto and Sakura find support in each other, and freedom in each other. Without realizing it, they are forming a secondary goal to saving Sasuke; and that is supporting each other through anything.

There are many different types of love, and many different ways to fall in love. Naruto and Sakura are on the road to one of the ways that constitute a strong, long-lasting love, and you captured this very well.

The Fanart recs were great, thank you!!!

Date: 2006-11-09 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ew-younerd.livejournal.com
Also, I feel that I should point out that I love how you explained their day-to-day chemistry.

This is why I love this pairing over so many other ones. This "attraction" between Naruto and Sakura isn't necessarily romantic. But I find this attraction to be quite well... natural, because they are not just attracted to each other's strength. Indeed, on the more human level, they are attracted even to each other's faults.

Probably one of my favourite lines in the entire thing, because of the truth it rings. And it is not that they 'tolerate' each other's flaws or are accepting of them out of sympathy or any of that. It's a natural, empathic understanding of what the other can and cannot do, and it makes them very unique in their interaction. These are two people that have very big and sometimes seemingly impossible goals for themselves, and like any human being they are prone to self-doubt. This is why their existence in each other's lives are so important.

The entire "Walk in the park" section was also brilliantly written and presented. It is funny and rather odd that Sakura did not realize the similarities between her and Naruto, and what I find interesting is that they also hold enough differences (in approach and sometimes in character) to keep it interesting between them. You really can't see these two being dull around each other.

I suppose this couple is really appealing to me because of the lack of expectations and abundance of support. ;)

...?

Date: 2006-11-09 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selun-chen.livejournal.com
I have no idea how I did this - I read that whole thing in about an hours. Well, I guess it means go me then.

I can agree with you on most points. Especially about the suffixes - I guess people tend to believe that suffixes are used to indicate closeness, which in some cases are not the case.

I admire that fact that you took your time to write this, and that you are rather reasonable with your arguments. NaruSaku is very natural - and it something that just doesn't come over night - which many fanfiction writers believe(but that is after all fanfiction)

I guess as a fellow NaruSaku worshiper that I will hope NaruSaku happens - or else it is just too bad.

Nice essay by the way.

Date: 2006-11-09 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blooming-cosmo.livejournal.com
Definitely adding this to memories. It's nice to see something so complete written on the pairing, so I thank you for actually taking the time to write this all out. Your insight on the pairing was great. I especially love how you go through their growth and how natural it was for them to form the bonds they did.

So much NaruSaku goodness. Must go through all the links you provided.

Very inspirational writing, and I admire your orgazational skills. Where's an NF smilie when you need one? D:

You're welcome for the icon, btw. XD

Date: 2006-11-09 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkwindkaze.livejournal.com
Yay, its out! Your workload must feel a thousand pounds lighter ^^

I hope you do not mind, but I suggested others read the manifesto on my own LJ and provided a link. Is that alright?

Again, you did an amazing job.

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Date: 2006-11-10 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maguskyros.livejournal.com
I think it needs to be said that just reading the first two parts SHOULD convert anybody to Naru/Saku fandom. I hope this gets around and people start opening their minds a bit on this pairing.

Good job.

Date: 2006-11-10 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lucific.livejournal.com
I've been waiting for this. And yours is absolutely brilliant! Definitely memming. xDDD

Date: 2006-11-10 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daniee1.livejournal.com
Very nice! I can tell this took a lot of time & effort. I like how you noted Shikaku's words to Shikamaru: "Even the roughest woman is tender to the man she loves". I've also noticed that and thought it was interesting how it's just like Sakura treats Naruto ^^ (well, she might not love him yet, but you know what I mean)

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Date: 2006-11-10 03:00 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wonderful manifesto Mizura ^^ Took most of the afternoon for me to read it but it was worth it! I especially loved the part where you talked about when Naruto realized why he liked Sakura to begin with, and then later in part II how he seemed to remember it all over again. It was something I didn't catch when I read the Sasuke bunshin scene (which was quite awhile ago).

*squeal* I love this pairing so much!!
~Skysong
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Date: 2006-11-10 03:48 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This is a very well written essay. However, it would've been nice if could've just talked about NaruSaku and not try to bring down other pairings in the process.

Date: 2006-11-10 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bunnynumber13.livejournal.com
Hmm. I think it's very well-written and well-researched. However I had a hard time staying with it. Usually I'm all for length but it felt like more information than was necessary. I'm not talking about the evidence of NaruSaku. For that I think you did an excellent job in detailing and picking out and describing. Mostly I think the ideas about men and women and relationships kind of warranted another essay altogether. You also used a few pictures more than once.

I like NaruSaku okay. I'm not fanatical about it nor am I rooting for it to happen. However I love how you espoused how it doesn't matter if they become romantic or not, their bond is beautiful as it is regardless. Not many essayists who write NaruSaku pairing support essays factor that in. For that alone this is what makes your essay unique and balanced and well worth a look for any Naruto fan regardless of pairing preference.

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Wow *_*

Date: 2006-11-10 04:46 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Amazing. Major respect for doing all of that.

You basically pointed out everything I love about NaruSaku, and then made me love it more <3

Nice job.

(But I will admit, I had trouble sitting still and reading it all... must be my medication XD)

[Kitsunejenna]

Fantastic...

Date: 2006-11-10 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deathraptor.livejournal.com
Mizura, I'm always impressed by these manifestos of yours, and this is by far the greatest. No wonder cham and everyone recognize you as a genious in your own right. There's no real way to describe this.

(I'm Raptor of NF btw)

Re: Fantastic...

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Date: 2006-11-10 06:18 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Calling SasuSaku "angst based" while NaruSaku is "Health-based" seemed a lot like a put down to me.

Date: 2006-11-10 06:20 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Sorry, that was a response to this (http://community.livejournal.com/ship_manifesto/156175.html?thread=4017423#t4017423)

Date: 2006-11-10 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soysauce.livejournal.com
YES YES THRICE YES. I love NaruSaku. It's a sweet pairing, a pairing that I don't find to be 'lust' or whatever. Their friendship is strong, and to ME it grew into a sort of innocent romance. Puppy love? No. I can't find the words XD. Great essay! So organized!

Date: 2006-11-10 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] momigi.livejournal.com
Wow. Just wow. You did an amazing job on this and as I read it, I think I became a stronger NaruSaku fan! Wonderful job!

Date: 2006-11-10 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] l33tie.livejournal.com
Your incredibly accurate and thought provoking points made me feel happy, sad at times, and at one point hungry. I don't know how that happened either. But nonetheless, I think this has to be most likely the greatest manifesto I have read in the Naruto fandom - although the irrelevant information (there wasn't lots, but it was some there: the "they are natural" argument was brought up a lot, it all seemed to be the same point - and gave me the feeling that you were trying to bash it into my skull with a shounen heroine's hammer) made me need to pause and watch a comedy show at times to make it feel less like my head was about to explode (I handle piles of information badly), but the main points got through spectacularly.

And, while I wouldn't consider myself a NaruSaku "fan" (I can see the appeal of nearly any pairing, although in all honesty more in these two than most others) the cute, realistic bond between those two showed very clearly through your essay. Thank you oh so much for reminding me just why I always liked them in a relationship together: they compliment each other. And no, not in the way that some NaruHina fans seem to think is so incredibly important. Whenever one falls down, the other already knows to catch them through instinct alone. Someone once told me that true love is when people have fights, have problems with each other, but after, manage to stay and love each other all the more, because - thanks to that little snap, fight, or irritation - they understand each other all the better.

Date: 2006-11-10 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] technoranma.livejournal.com
*adds to memories* I almost cried it was so gawddamn good.

Date: 2006-11-10 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Bueatiful just simply bueatiful... I hope that their companionate love evolves into consummate love over time.

Date: 2006-11-11 03:33 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
omg it sux cuz naruhina 4ever!!


Kidding! Kidding!

This was extremely well-written. I'm not sure I've ever read such an excellent defence of a pairing before. The images were an excellent touch; the definitely worked wonders to illustrate (pardon the pun) your points.

I've always held an appreciation for NaruSaku for some of the reasons you listed, but you really solidified them. While I can admit NaruSaku is certainly more feasible than most other pairings (mostly due to the fact that Naruto interacts with Sakura the most), other NaruX pairings still have their charm (Hinata's bloody cute sometimes, and Ino and Temari...strong, smart and gutsy...they're just hot!)

It would simply be amazing to see other pairing defences as well written as this (Naruto+females; I pretty much couldn't care less about the other male characters). Hell, only half-as-well-written defences would be great!

Date: 2006-11-11 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kidouche.livejournal.com
Oh Miz...

I admit, my great fiery love of NaruSaku was taking a backseat to my current DeiTobi obsession, but reading this made me remember all the reasons why I love NaruSaku so much, and why I used to be such an ardent NSLAP-er. XD (I think laziness has gotten the better of me recently...that, and I just don't enjoy visiting Narutofan anymore because of the insane amounts of Stupid.)

Beautfiul, Miz. I teared up at a few points (especially when you discussed how willingly Naruto shunted aside his own happiness for Sakura's sake, and how Sakura understood Naruto's feelings enough to take his half of the burden upon herself...the images helped, too). I'm in the process of re-reading Part II, and I'm even more excited now to relive the NaruSaku moments again.

I don't know...there is something so...poignant about their relationship, and it really gets me in the gut. Like you mentioned, I would kill to find someone like Naruto, who only wanted to bring out the best in me and didn't pressure me to be someone I'm not. That's what these two do for each other, and that's what they'll continue to do. Whether or not their relationship develops into romance (which I think it can...plenty of lovers start off as friends, and I've heard that physical attraction also comes with time in some cases...you know, the whole "their personality makes them cute!" thing), it is still beautiful, and it's so rewarding to watch.

You should be very proud of this, Miz. ♥ Excellent work.
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