I am so happy I bumped into Miss Vorona online or I never would have found where you posted this little gem. I know my beta help was minimal at best but when I reread this essay I don't feel so bad about that. Afterall, how can you critique letter perfect analysis? Excellent job Drea! You still have me pondering the implications of Iris being indebted to Justin and how that colors her sense of responsibility to him. Also, I was rereading "Carol of the Bells" (my absolute fave of your stories) and was impressed at how you conveyed the notion of physicality in that story as well. I shall now bow down to your greatness...
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Date: 2005-11-12 05:01 am (UTC)