Wonderfully written. XD Raito and L is all about sex, I swear (well, unless it's one of those very few but oh so good AU fics. Yours for example). I really don't have anything constructive to say since this is beautiful the way it is-- but I highly recommend LxRaito crackfics from darkeyedwolf and firedraygon97DN 20 Themes (http://www.livejournal.com/users/firedraygon97/130244.html#cutid1). XD
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Date: 2005-04-20 09:01 pm (UTC)