Wow, I really liked this. That said, I don't think that the Ikkaku has his arm around Yumichika and Yumichika has his hand… in between Ikkaku’s legs, seemingly grabbing something is quite right.
I looked at the picture, and I saw that, considering the angle of everyone's shoulders, and the fact that Kaku looks ready to hit someone with his sword, he might not really be touching Yumi at all. Yumi's hand also just seems to be... Hanging there, for no good reason. It might be grabbing something, but the 'crease' lines on Ikkaku's pants seems to be coming from his foot's shadow, not Yumichika grabbing his pants. But good essay!
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Date: 2010-11-17 03:17 pm (UTC)Ikkaku has his arm around Yumichika and Yumichika has his hand… in between Ikkaku’s legs, seemingly grabbing something is quite right.
I looked at the picture, and I saw that, considering the angle of everyone's shoulders, and the fact that Kaku looks ready to hit someone with his sword, he might not really be touching Yumi at all. Yumi's hand also just seems to be... Hanging there, for no good reason. It might be grabbing something, but the 'crease' lines on Ikkaku's pants seems to be coming from his foot's shadow, not Yumichika grabbing his pants. But good essay!