I did notice a few typos in this sentence: He and his wife have been seperated for fiive months at the beginnig of the series. Should be: He and his wife have been separated for five months at the beginning of the series.
Also, on the note Lassiter's ex-wife sent back with the non-Hummel figurines-- She sends them back to Lassiter with a note reading, "Seperated means seperate!" --I believe that the letter read was, "Carlton, Separate means apart."
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Date: 2007-02-13 09:50 am (UTC)I did notice a few typos in this sentence: He and his wife have been seperated for fiive months at the beginnig of the series. Should be: He and his wife have been separated for five months at the beginning of the series.
Also, on the note Lassiter's ex-wife sent back with the non-Hummel figurines-- She sends them back to Lassiter with a note reading, "Seperated means seperate!" --I believe that the letter read was, "Carlton, Separate means apart."
Hope that helps. :) Again, terrific job.