ext_60784 ([identity profile] oregonblondie.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ship_manifesto 2006-06-15 10:06 pm (UTC)

Lovely essay. I really like reading these, and I think there's something that makes me smile about Sparrowbeth.

2 Things: You have a typo/grammatical error in 'iv. TOGETHER'

This is the place where she teach's Jack her pirate song,

It should be teaches instead.

And may I recommend the book "Under the Black Flag: The Romance and the Reality of Life Among the Pirates' by David Cordingly. You seem to have a great appreciation for both the real life history of pirates, as well as the fictional history that has been created over time.

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