http://aweofshe.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aweofshe.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ship_manifesto 2005-04-18 04:51 am (UTC)

That was beyond awesome. Maybe I'll convert to 2x1-ism now, even though I'm not really in the fandom to begin with. Really, you've made it...make sense.

I had to chuckle when you mentioned Heero lifting parts from the Deathscythe. I remember that scene clear as day. XD And the manga bits were interesting as I've only seen one volume of GW manga.

Um, I caught some typos...

Deathstythe = Deathscythe
beem = beam
complement = compliment

Then there's the 'a' in "after making a the critical mistake of killing Noventa..." that you can omit...man, I'm being anal. ><;;

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