Hello there!

Thanks so much for reading, and I'm really glad that the way I'd broken it down worked for you. I wondered if I was just being too fastidious in where I was drawing the lines so it's a relief for you to say that.

And thanks for picking up on the animagus/animagi thing. The sentence was originally dealing with James and Peter as well, hence the plurality, but I changed it last minute. Oops!