I've never seen this movie. But you know what? After reading this, I'm probably going to burst into flames and run about the room screaming if I don't see it in about two seconds. So, I'd say you did a fine job with this.

(On an almost-related note, I just watched Swing Kids for the first time last week, and was stunned to discover that, either I'm not a good Googler, or there are all of two slash fics for that film. What is it with Christian and the slashy movies?!)