ext_266161 ([identity profile] we-are-zombies.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ship_manifesto 2011-02-23 08:55 pm (UTC)

I was wondering if you were going to do this!

You explained everything very well, I think. I agree -- there's certainly no harm in clichés. I really love most of 'em, actually.

I suppose that I hadn't really thought of Astrid as a character that had weaknesses... she was just sort of there to me. I liked that she was tough, but other than that I didn't think much of her.

Reading this, though, I can definitely see that I wasn't as observant as I should have been. I remember the scene where Hiccup left and I guess I just breezed over her being worried about him -- but thinking back, you're right. I agree that the flight wasn't given the time and treatment that it needed, but now I don't think that it came out of nowhere. In the end, considering where they both came from and where they're going, it's actually pretty sweet.

Good job!

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