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2010-07-08 06:09 pm (UTC)
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Fufufufufu! Don't be embarrassed!
Nah, that only "bad" thing that slowed down the reading was that almost every single "what" in there grammatically should be "which" instead. But once I figured out that's what you meant, reading went smoother.
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Nah, that only "bad" thing that slowed down the reading was that almost every single "what" in there grammatically should be "which" instead. But once I figured out that's what you meant, reading went smoother.