ext_6802 ([identity profile] wistful-fever.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ship_manifesto 2005-12-29 03:23 am (UTC)

This is really wonderful, and thought out. But since this is my pairing of choice right now (the shame!), can I make a few suggestions?

With the quotes, it might be better to include a few pairing-specific ones that give some insight to their characters and their relationship a well. Like 'so that's why you ran away' and the fight on the bridge, where Dean is telling Sam he can't deny who he is, just as examples.

And also, as a vidder for SPN, I gotta say I wish [livejournal.com profile] supernaturalvid was linked in there somewhere. ;)

I really liked your character summaries and the photos you chose.

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