OK, I'm only half-finished so far but I decided to comment once more because I'm not sure how long I'll be online and I don't want to forget.
I said it at the other 8059 manifesto here a year ago too (I was just searching for it when I found yours =D): I think the one more thing I love more than well-written fanfics in fandom could very well be well-written manifesto or fanfics where you really notice that the author has a good understanding of the characters and probably given it much thought.
I love how you point things out. With the things and scenes you list alone, the potential slash becomes very obvious IMO. XD I just love how you (or pectus_pectoris I guess xD) cut so many panels out too, I had forgotten about some of them! But you should probably check the links again, many of them are linked wrongly (it's no big deal though, usually it's one word too much or something and the readers can just erase it) and in this paragraph "After a nasty accident involving all guardians suffering from prolonged, paralytic poison in different buildings, both Yamamoto and Gokudera get free from it and meet in the middle of the battle , looking really relieved to see each other safe. They instantly join forces to free the remaining guardians, touchingly worrying about each other wounds in their own respective ways. " both links link to the same picture.
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww296/Lampazo_libre/022-011.jpg <- I loved this scene so much *lol* also Mini-Gokudera and Yama-mocchan!
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I said it at the other 8059 manifesto here a year ago too (I was just searching for it when I found yours =D): I think the one more thing I love more than well-written fanfics in fandom could very well be well-written manifesto or fanfics where you really notice that the author has a good understanding of the characters and probably given it much thought.
I love how you point things out. With the things and scenes you list alone, the potential slash becomes very obvious IMO. XD I just love how you (or pectus_pectoris I guess xD) cut so many panels out too, I had forgotten about some of them! But you should probably check the links again, many of them are linked wrongly (it's no big deal though, usually it's one word too much or something and the readers can just erase it) and in this paragraph "After a nasty accident involving all guardians suffering from prolonged, paralytic poison in different buildings, both Yamamoto and Gokudera get free from it and
meet in the middle of the battle , looking really relieved to see each other safe. They instantly join forces to free the remaining guardians, touchingly worrying about each other wounds in their own respective ways. " both links link to the same picture.
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww296/Lampazo_libre/022-011.jpg <- I loved this scene so much *lol* also Mini-Gokudera and Yama-mocchan!