ext_12967 ([identity profile] writingpathways.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ship_manifesto 2004-10-01 07:29 am (UTC)

This sentence: My main theory on the curse is that counts on ignorance of it's loop hole.

Should read like this: My main theory on the curse is that it counts on the subjects ignorance of it to have its loophole.

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