ext_14419: the mouse that wants Arthur's brain (Default)
ext_14419 ([identity profile] derien.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ship_manifesto 2007-03-28 10:57 am (UTC)

Oh, most excellent! *applause!!!* (excessive use of exclamaition points is, in this case, deemed appropriate.)

(A couple of little possible typos...
Chuffy,” I said, “what I’m driving at his that there is only one man who can get you out of this mess.

'his' for 'is'.

Also, Lord Towster is referred to, twice, as Lord Rowster, which also happened in one of the most popular fanfics. I can't find my edition of the book at the moment to check it, but I -think- it's Towster, really.)

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